Can you rate my resume 1-10 and give input on any Changes I need to make. I have been searching for another job for the past 4 months and I think something in my resume may be turning away potiential employers. Just need some help, Thanks! PROFILE Work history in Office Support for over 10 years and Human Resources Assistance Strong Customer Service personality Computer Systems: Windows 95/97/ME, Macintosh Proficient in: Excel, Access, Outlook, PowerPoint, and People Soft, STS EDUCATION 2002-Cambridge College, Cambridge MA B.A. Psychology/Juvenile Justice 1997-2000 Roxbury Community College A.S. Early Childhood Education EMPLOYMENT 4/02-12/03 HQ Global Workplaces, Boston MA Receptionist Designed a client reference guide to aide the telecommunications specialists. Greet & assist clients in any capacity needed. Process company & client invoices & checks. Set up and breakdown of video conferences. Conducted LCD presentations & T1 set up. Answered Multi lined system for company. Enter billing in to People Soft system. Typed documents for company and clients. Telecommunications Specialist Sort incoming and outgoing company and client mailings. Answer multi lined system for company and clients. Assist in phone line connections. Faxing & photocopying. 12/00-1/02 Boston Financial Data Services, Boston MA Account Specialist Answer client inquires on personal mutual fund accounts. Maintain accounts with changes and redemptions daily. Extensive knowledge of funds and prospectus. Answer multi-line system. 3/00-12/00 CASCAP, Inc, Cambridge MA Human Resources Assistant Co-designed and maintained resume data base, which kept an accurate account of all incoming resume and new hirer files. Processed and filed hard copy documents for new hires & health insurance. Distribute incoming resumes & candidate correspondence. Conducted reference verification call outs. Process CORI & ESS back ground checks. 9/99-3/00 The Boston Globe/Sunday Department, Boston Office Assistant MA (Internship) Enter prospective articles in intranet system for editors approval. Interview informants for article information. Answer multi line system. Maintained previous article logs. Filing & Faxing. Sorry it looks so out of sorts.. I am looking for comments on the content. Trying to cut and past on to this page was not too easy. -Queen Nefertiti What is your email address?
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Id give it an 8 If you get a professional resume maker. it helps you with better heading names and formats. But looks good
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looks fine a Little long
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One thing that I noticed is you have some things written in past tense, and some in present tense. I think they should all be in past tense, unless you are still doing them.
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i'd say an 8, you have the right idea, just need some help organizing it.
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Usually the objective and the employment history is listed first, education, special skills (such as your ocmputer skille syou listed) and the at least three references... Ont he job you listed filing, faxing, stc etc..basic office equipment.. In most businessed these are indetified as copy machines, fac machines; etc.. I hope this helps
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It should be in this order: Employment Education Skills get rid of the profile under skills you didnt list microsoft word. thats the most important. typing speed? I have been a recruiter for 5 years. If you want help, email it to me in word format and i will make the changes.
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You may want to include a career objective heading (you want to be specific about the type of position you are seeking). Then under your profile, you want to highlight the skills which are relevant to the type of position you are seeking. Make sure that you use present verb tense for job duties in your current position only. For your previous positions, use past tense. Also, I would delete the the phrase "typed documents" and change to "prepared documents". I would also delete "extensive knowledge of funds..." as a job duty. That is something that would be listed under your professional profile. Someone mentioned that you should include references but that is bad advice. Never list references unless specifically asked by a potential employer. Instead, you should note "reference available upon request". Overall, I would give it a 7.
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